SimsUnbound
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
Top posting users this month
No user
Latest topics
New* Before & After EditingSat Apr 11, 2015 3:56 am435q
BARBIETOPIA, THE PRINCESS EDITION♛ MOCK DUE TOMORROW ☺Sat Mar 07, 2015 11:38 amBobSkellington
Face Off Cycle 4 - WINNER ANNOUNCED!!Wed Feb 25, 2015 10:19 amNinisims
Vana's Custom ContentSun Feb 22, 2015 6:17 pmVanadis
Pixelated Cycle One Sign Ups OpenThu Jan 22, 2015 3:43 pmbestfrienemies14
Statistics
We have 5583 registered usersThe newest registered user is worknmamaOur users have posted a total of 118969 messagesin 1676 subjects

Go down
NatSims123
NatSims123
Member
Member
Posts : 19
Tokens : 3974
Join date : 2013-06-03

~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* Empty ~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!*

Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:07 pm
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

Here is where I am starting my new story hopefully a long legacy it is a new twist off Alice And Wonderland as I adore the story line and it just inspired me! Hope you like please leave any comments and constructive criticism in this forum thankyou! ~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* 3616433288

*CHAPTER 1*

The Clinic


Last edited by NatSims123 on Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:20 pm; edited 2 times in total
NatSims123
NatSims123
Member
Member
Posts : 19
Tokens : 3974
Join date : 2013-06-03

~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* Empty *CHAPTER 1*

Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:16 pm
The Clinic

Slowly I made my way to the rusty, worn out doors of the clinic, fighting to keep my balance from the harsh, bitter wind. It didn't help at all that I was already feeling a little dizzy. Looking around me I see not only the world I live in but also my freedom because I know as soon as I set foot past them doors I will be trapped forever. Spasms of smoky red and fiery orange glisten around me as I catch glimpses of the autumn leaves falling, some resting in my hair. Softly I trail my ice cold fingers through my hair trying to comb out the remains of any leaves.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

My eyes suddenly spot a gold shiny object in the distance. Should I see what it is? No, I think, I must not let my curiosity get the better of me. But as I start to walk on I can't help but wonder. My mind starts to ache from all the thoughts that rush into my head. I need to see this. Turning around, I advance backwards until I come across the area in which I found the foreign object. I soon realize it was under a large willow tree.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

I find myself viewing the mysterious tree. Long thin branches with cascading leaves hanging from it. I always thought that willow trees resembled curtains but this one did not have that apperance.There was something different about it but I couldn't decide what.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

When I inspect the area around the tree the golden object has vanished.Why am I wasting my time with this? I mentally scold myself for avoiding the real purpose of why I was here today.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

I sauntered back over to the muddy brick path, a million thoughts still running around in my head. Something still doesn't seem right about that tree...

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
NatSims123
NatSims123
Member
Member
Posts : 19
Tokens : 3974
Join date : 2013-06-03

~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* Empty Re: ~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!*

Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:18 pm
First chapter is up hope it is okay for a first attemp ~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* 3616433288 any comments are wonderful thankyou!
Sponsored content

~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!* Empty Re: ~Back To Reality-The Legacy~ *Chapter 1 is up!*

Back to top
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum