Roses Will Die... ♥

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Here is the first short introduction extract of my new story 'Roses Will Die...♥'.I hope you enjoy the story and feel free to leave any feedback and fill in the review form if you wish! Ella


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Introduction

I stood.The gloomy atmosphere circling around my body.Grey fog flew against my snowy pallor..as my dark eyes hung deep in sorrow.Air...it was being slowly removed from my lungs,limp,dangling almost dead.I lay against the rock,my head resting, pretending it was my pillow,but yet i could feel the sharp jagged ends cutting into my head.The sharp pain shot into my neck squeezing the utmost pain and shrieks out of me.That one point that i knew all time was to end,how ever was this going to survive,This moment,this deep agony.I closed my eyes and dark hair covered me,like a shield of darkness.That crave,that want,that yearn for something i could not seem to get over.My eyes closed as the last vision of my normal life enveloped my eyes.Silence.Darkness.I awoke with my life scarred..i was a vampire.

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