My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
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My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:29 am
This is my model Noah wearing my first hair drawing. I used one of the in game short hairs as a template and then went to town doing my own thing. So what do you all think? Is it good enough for competition or not? I def dont want to lose points for a crap job.
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:35 am
He are so steep and it doesn't real. Otherwise, it's beautiful.
Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:02 am
I would work on the strands and colors a bit more before using it in a competition, but you are headed in the right direction
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:38 am
Thank y'all for your input it was very helpful. Here's my new version using your critiques and I think it turned out much better.
@Bliss do you think this one might be competition worthy. I think the strands look a ton better.
Your opinion is very valuable as I respect your talent
@Bliss do you think this one might be competition worthy. I think the strands look a ton better.
Your opinion is very valuable as I respect your talent
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:13 am
I would try to blend the bases of the strands into his hair at his scalp, and add more strands because it's looking pretty sparse.
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:20 pm
Okay thanks for the tip, Vanadis
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:51 pm
Pretty good start. I agree with Bliss and Vana, maybe try blending it make the strands and closer to the scalp and add more strands. As well, don't forget about dodging(for shine) and burning for some final touches
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:13 pm
I did work on it using the critiques given just haven't posted it, and thanks cutebina. I haven't worked much with dodge and burn. I have a basic understanding of it , but haven't ventured to use them yet so I will use them for this.
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:38 pm
So how do you blend hair strands? I've been using a smudge tool. Is that right or is there another tool I should be using? I have photoshop so the Gimp tutorials dont help me any.
Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:46 pm
When they said that I think they meant more along the lines of drawing the different colors of hair overlapping each other so that the colors blend better. Not literally blending them with the smudge tool. Lol I think
Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:01 pm
That does look better, But try to imagine 1 point your hair is trying to go since you are shaping it upward.
This ofc does not always apply to all hair shapes but for instance...Imagine your focal point is the top center of the hair. Give the hair some flow and curves
You should have the strands going in that one direction. You have strands on the side of the head that are kinda doing there own thing.
Have you checked my tutorial out?
This isn't great but it took like 2 min -
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This ofc does not always apply to all hair shapes but for instance...Imagine your focal point is the top center of the hair. Give the hair some flow and curves
You should have the strands going in that one direction. You have strands on the side of the head that are kinda doing there own thing.
Have you checked my tutorial out?
This isn't great but it took like 2 min -
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:29 pm
That's really great, Bliss, especially for 2 minutes. This is my latest effort
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:30 pm
I can see I still need more work on the blending and the dodge/ burn tools.
@Bliss where would I find your hair drawing tutorial and is it for photoshop?
@Bliss where would I find your hair drawing tutorial and is it for photoshop?
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:51 am
Thanks, littlesmirk, love the new avi by the way
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Re: My first hair drawing. What do y'all think?
Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:44 am
I thought you might be interested what it looked like after I used the tutorial. I had no clue what I was doing (Lol). I used no layers in mine yada yada blah blah blah...
So this is after using the tutorial. I thought it turned out great. I just need to work on shape and the highlighted strands, but thought this was loads better then my previous work. Thank you, thank you, thank you , littlesmirk, for the link
So this is after using the tutorial. I thought it turned out great. I just need to work on shape and the highlighted strands, but thought this was loads better then my previous work. Thank you, thank you, thank you , littlesmirk, for the link
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